草壁小米:其实我一直是觉得它给的时间确实不够表达清楚一个观点。可是因为我无力扭转现实，所以希望能让自己的表达稍微精简一下，但又不知道到底该缩减哪些。我举个例子哈。
话题：which place do you prefer to live, town or city?
草壁小米:My answer:
I prefer town to city for four reasons.
估计两个就够了，好像很少见到人们在口语一二题中说四个理由并且完成的。
草壁小米:Firts, the pace of life is relatively slower in town than in city. Therefore, one can have time to evaluate what he has been doing and adjust his schedules to better achieve his goals. While in city, many people are pushed by great stress from his surroundings, colleges
etcand thus lose the ability to fully consider their life but to be made a working machine for survival.
Second, some scientific reseach shows that one will become more aggressive in dense surroundings. Proper aggression may benefit, but too much of it may cause pyschylogical problems and even crimes.In the town, the population is much less denser than in city and thus such phenomenon can be lessened.
Third, the air is much cleaner and clearer in town than in city. So one can do exercises out doors while in the city one may have to go to the excercise center to do so, which can not be afforded by everyone.
感觉这一条没有充分展开，不如整个third删除掉。
草壁小米:The last, one can better enjoy his life in town than in city. Night life is more popular in city while such entertainment is far from what I mean by enjoying life. To go into nature to enjoy what it have gifted us is a way to better relieve one refresh one to return to work. And this is more available in town than in city.
我应该去掉哪些东西呢？
我总体感觉，一二题说上六七句就可以了。还有就是尽量减少his的使用，不行就用his or her。好像og里说不赞成使用etc，感觉用and so on好一点。
还有，我的一点想法，不知道你上面写得是你说出来之后，再把说得整理出来呢？还是对着口语题写出来的，然后认为这是自己应该这么说。如果是前者，我觉得lz的口语十分了得！如果是后者，我比较怀疑真正到时候能不能想出这么丰富和复杂的结构来。
另外，我觉得在1 2 4中，你可以自己酌情删掉一条。我觉得两条真的已经够了。
